2008年10月7日星期二
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Hellow, my name is Bowen. This is my first message on this board. I'm 16 year old, i live in Olot. I live with my parents. I don't have brothers or sisters.. I like play basketball and computer . I'm writing to this message board because I'm very interested animals rights. Because there are a lot of people killing animals, many animals have become extinct. In the near future, we will not see cute little animals in the world Animals are not forthcoming. Therefore, we should protect animals, not to let such terrible things happen.
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Bowen,
Well done. You deserve a B because your message is sensible and mature. Please correct the mistakes in Capital letters and upload it again.
carmina
HELLO , my name is Bowen. This is my first message on this BLOG. I'm 16 yearS old AND I live in Olot. I live with my parents. I don't have brothers or sisters. I like playING basketball and computer GAMES . I'm writing to this BLOG because I'm very interested IN animals rights. There are a lot of people killing animals, many animals have become extinctED. In the near future, we will not see cute little animals in the world Animals are not forthcoming. Therefore, we should protect animals, not to let such terrible things happen.
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